PRINCE PERSIA
2019/05/23, 13:36
درود بر همه ی دوستان گرامی
اولین باره که دارم یه رمان می نیویسم مشخصا خیلی بی تجربم پس لطفا با نقداتون بهم کمک کنید
داستانمو به زبان انگلیسی نوشتم. دوستانی که می گن زبانشون خوب نیس توجه کنن که من رمانو به زبان ساده نوشتم پس درکش اصلن سخت نیس
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یه توضیح و مقدمه کوتاه به انگلیسی
In a land where peace can not last for long, trouble always is brewing. Dark ancient power is rising from darkness. Dark forces are rallying once again to take over the universe while low races are squabbling over power and throne not knowing what is coming for them. Sweeping from harsh cold lands to distant unknown kingdoms, here is a tale of houses , lords and ladies, soldiers and sorcerers, kings and assassins, who came together in a time of grim omens. Amid plots and counterplots, tragedy, and betrayal, victory and terror fate of races remains in hands of heros and villians knowing what is whispering in darkness.
Chapter 0 Prologue - Google Docs (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Z1NcwBmA7ht2mEQfLQH008TDqlrUcqHYqDdm7HcJdR8/edit#)
whisper of darkness (edited) - Google Docs (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oteLjtbF93p0CYdVoufggUadPfi0R95lYBHwTrhmDSg/edit)
اولین باره که دارم یه رمان می نیویسم مشخصا خیلی بی تجربم پس لطفا با نقداتون بهم کمک کنید
داستانمو به زبان انگلیسی نوشتم. دوستانی که می گن زبانشون خوب نیس توجه کنن که من رمانو به زبان ساده نوشتم پس درکش اصلن سخت نیس
12258
یه توضیح و مقدمه کوتاه به انگلیسی
In a land where peace can not last for long, trouble always is brewing. Dark ancient power is rising from darkness. Dark forces are rallying once again to take over the universe while low races are squabbling over power and throne not knowing what is coming for them. Sweeping from harsh cold lands to distant unknown kingdoms, here is a tale of houses , lords and ladies, soldiers and sorcerers, kings and assassins, who came together in a time of grim omens. Amid plots and counterplots, tragedy, and betrayal, victory and terror fate of races remains in hands of heros and villians knowing what is whispering in darkness.
Chapter 0 Prologue - Google Docs (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Z1NcwBmA7ht2mEQfLQH008TDqlrUcqHYqDdm7HcJdR8/edit#)
whisper of darkness (edited) - Google Docs (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oteLjtbF93p0CYdVoufggUadPfi0R95lYBHwTrhmDSg/edit)